Post by Kaze on Oct 23, 2009 11:52:08 GMT -8
First off, I apologize if I'm speaking out of turn here.
Okay, so what caught my eye about this site is the plot and stuff. You know, mutants vs. oppressive government in a futuristic dystopia. But, in my opinion, the In Character boards don't really reflect the given plot too well.
As is, the "city" seems like a nice little suburb for middle-class teens/young adults to hang out. You know, like you might find in a High School RP, or something. The basement of the club and the cave hide-out seem sorta like an afterthought. I mean, there's nothing wrong with that. I just feel it doesn't mesh well with the plot.
A place like Midgar, for example, might be more in line with the given plot.
Oh, sure. There can be some nicer areas, for rich people and/or Government officials. However, I think it should be dark and gritty overall, you know?
But that's just my two cents.
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Okay, so what caught my eye about this site is the plot and stuff. You know, mutants vs. oppressive government in a futuristic dystopia. But, in my opinion, the In Character boards don't really reflect the given plot too well.
As is, the "city" seems like a nice little suburb for middle-class teens/young adults to hang out. You know, like you might find in a High School RP, or something. The basement of the club and the cave hide-out seem sorta like an afterthought. I mean, there's nothing wrong with that. I just feel it doesn't mesh well with the plot.
A place like Midgar, for example, might be more in line with the given plot.
Oh, sure. There can be some nicer areas, for rich people and/or Government officials. However, I think it should be dark and gritty overall, you know?
But that's just my two cents.
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I'll try to rearrange the boards and such.